Smart Learners: posting a blog

 Today we were learning about the old lady in the junkyard. We had to write one sentence about her and we said it in front of the class

To day we have don WW1

My name is Sergeant Demetrius.

It was a quiet day until noon when we were suddenly attacked by our enemies. I was surprised but felt brave.

I had put on my gear that I wear for battle and ran to get my weapons. I ran out with my gun and started shooting my enemies BANG BANG BANG BANG! All I could think of was staying alive so I can see my family again. I looked at a photo of them and this gave me the determination to destroy my enemies and survive. All of a sudden I felt a burning pain in my arm.

SOMEONE SHOT ME. I could taste the dirt when my head hit the ground and this I time I felt fear. But my friend, my life line dragged me to safety. I got bandaged up. I tried  to hold my gun but I couldn’t. I said to myself “I can do this! My friends are dying out there!” and then, right before my eyes I saw my friend die. I got so angry. I got up and got my gun, went out and started shooting. I saw a big gun and I used it. The tanks came and we were winning we won the war.

I  got to see my family again we all went to the funeral we pot flowers in each grave People were crying and people was happy The End